Question

某調查組到社會上進行調查環境污染的問題，設計了下列調查表.。
請你根據上面的調查表說說作為學生如何做好學校環境保護方面的工作。

kinds of pollution	There are many kinds of pollution around us such as _air   pollution, _water_      __ pollution, __noise/white__  pollution and rubbish pollution.
results	The environment on the _earth_ is becoming worse and _worse_ .

注意：短文要求正確、流暢；詞數80個左右。（本小題15分）
提示詞：keep…clean and tidy,   clean(v.),   sweep,   throw rubbish into the dustbins,
plant,  so that,  protect,  speak highly of(高度贊揚), 
make a contribution to doing(為……貢獻)
(不得出現真實的學校名稱和姓名。)
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version:
Our school is our second home. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, I think it is necessary for us to clean the school yard every day. We must clean the windows and the doors. We also need to sweep the floor. Make sure everyone knows to throw rubbish into the dustbins. Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course, a lot of trees and grass should be planted in our school so that our school looks greener. In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹有那些污染，污染造成的后果，以及在學校如何變化環境。注意提建議的語言的應用。
【亮點說明】這篇短文句式豐富而且使用了大量的的短語。如It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. First of all，also，Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course，In a word等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。