Question

假如你是李華，你有兩個(gè)筆友。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格內(nèi)容并以My Pen Friends為題介紹你的筆友情況。

姓名	Chen Peng	Mary
年齡	13	11
居住城市	Shanghai	Moscow
特長(zhǎng)及加入的俱樂(lè)部	Play basketball / sports club	Sing and dance/music club
上學(xué)的交通方式	By bike	By bus
喜歡的動(dòng)物及原因	Pandas/cute	Koalas/friendly
住地天氣	Sunny	Snowy
現(xiàn)在的動(dòng)作	Play basketball	Make a snowman with friends

                                                                                         
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                          
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                          
                          

Answer 1

My Pen friends
My name is Li Hua. I have two pen friends. They are Chen Peng and Mary. Chen Peng is 13 years old. Mary is only 11. Chen Peng lives in Shanghai. He plays basketball well and he joins the sports club. Mary can sing and dance and she is in the music club. Chen Peng goes to school by bike. Mary takes a bus to the school. Chen Peng likes pandas very much because they are cute. Mary thinks koalas are very friendly so she likes them. Now it’s sunny in Shanghai and Chen Peng is playing basketball. It’s snowing in Moscow. Mary is making a snowman with her friends now.

試題分析：本文是寫筆友平時(shí)的生活習(xí)慣，或者他們的喜好，所以敘述時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)，要注意主謂一致。最后一欄里敘述的是現(xiàn)在正在做的事情，要用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)來(lái)表示。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，句子應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，為文章增色不少，如：Chen Peng likes pandas very much because they are cute. Mary thinks koalas are very friendly so she likes them. Mary is making a snowman with her friends now.
等，短文還用了一些連詞如：and、because等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化，這樣避免了句式的單調(diào)。