Question

根據(jù)中文意思和英文所提示的詞語(yǔ),并結(jié)合自己的想象,寫(xiě)出意思連貫,符合邏輯餓一篇短文。所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須全部都用上；中文提示不必逐句翻譯。
提示：上周三下午韓梅放學(xué)后乘車(chē)回家。在車(chē)上她發(fā)現(xiàn)司機(jī)在學(xué)英語(yǔ)。司機(jī)對(duì)韓梅說(shuō)了些什么？此事對(duì)你有何啟示？為2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)你打算做些什么？
英文提示：afternoon,  go home;  on the bus;  find;   learn;   surprised;  weak;  English;  when;  work hard;  Beijing’s Olympic Games;  I think;   modern

Answer 1

Last Wednesday afternoon, Han Mei went home from school by bus. On the bus she found that the driver was learning English. She was very surprised and asked, “What’re you doing that for?” The driver said, “I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I’m working hard at it to get ready for Beijing’s Olympic Games in 2008.” I think holding the Olympic Games is not the task of the government. Everyone can take part in it and do something for it. As a student, I can try my best to learn English well so that I can help the foreigner people in need then. I also can do some volunteer work.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。可以根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容對(duì)事情進(jìn)行闡述然后發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確的使用和主謂一致問(wèn)題。文章的表述要準(zhǔn)確流暢，可適當(dāng)使用一些承接性的句子和短語(yǔ)。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表述清楚流利。文中使用了一些常用的表達(dá)方式和句型，例如：Now I’m working hard at it to get ready for Beijing’s Olympic Games in 2008.我現(xiàn)在努力學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)來(lái)為2008年的北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)準(zhǔn)備。Work hard at 努力做……；動(dòng)詞不定式表目的。As a student, I can try my best to learn English well so that I can help the foreigner people in need then.作為學(xué)生，我會(huì)盡力學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，為了那時(shí)能幫助有困難的外國(guó)人。Try my best盡我最大努力；so that 為了。