Question

假設(shè)下面是你的筆友Peter的一些信息。請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文介紹一下他的情況。
要求：① 語句通順，符合邏輯，可適當發(fā)揮。
② 詞數(shù)80字左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
1. 年齡及外貌：出生于1997年8月23號，圓臉，長鼻，戴一副眼鏡.
2. 飲食：健康，常吃水果蔬菜，很少吃垃圾食品.
3．性格：慷慨大方，樂于助人(舉一例)……。
4．品質(zhì)：善良，善待動物。
5．夢想之家：遠離城市，靠近大海。
I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.
                                                                             
                                                                          
                                                                                
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                       
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                       
                                                                                 
                                                                                
                                                                       
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                   
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                    
                                                                                   
This is my pen friend，what about yours?

Answer 1

One possible version：
I am very glad to introduce my pen friend Peter to you.
He was born on August 23 1997. He has a round face and a long nose. He wears a pair of glasses because of working on the computer too much at night. He is strong and healthy. Every day he eats much fruit and many vegetables. What’s more, he seldom eats junk food. He is generous and helpful. He often gives his seats to people in need on the bus. He is also kind. He always treats animals kindly. His dream home is far away from the city. It’s close to the sea.
This is my pen friend , what about yours?

試題分析：本篇書面表達應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容介紹筆友的年齡外貌性格品質(zhì)，飲食及夢想。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準確運用時態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運用了because of，what’s more等連詞進行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:in need, far away from, close to等。