Question

今年4月14日青海省玉樹(shù)縣發(fā)生了7.1級(jí)的地震，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信給玉樹(shù)縣的中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀隳転樗麄冏鲂┦裁矗�并鼓�?lì)他們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)、相信新校園、新家園會(huì)有的。
要求：90詞左右，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。
Dear friends，
                                                                                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  

Answer 1

Dear friends，
I’m sorry to hear that there was a strong earthquake in Yushu, Qinghai province(your hometown).I watch TV every day and care about the news from Yushu. We are so sad that most of us cried .We decided to raise money for charity to help homeless people. Everyone in our class takes out all our pocket money. Secondly, we should buy books for students in Yushu. Thirdly, we want to be volunteers to help them out. We feel good about doing something for you.
As a middle school student, we must be brave and study hard. We should learn from the PLA men . I’m sure ,with the help of all Chinese , You’ll have new schools and new houses soon Let’s work hard together !
Yours sincerely,
Nancy

試題分析：這是一封寫(xiě)給玉樹(shù)災(zāi)區(qū)的信，首先要用正確的格式去寫(xiě)，會(huì)用一些短語(yǔ)，了解英語(yǔ)的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語(yǔ)的不同，需要平時(shí)對(duì)課本上的課文要正確地理解，會(huì)仿照課文的句子寫(xiě)出正確的英語(yǔ)句子，信的開(kāi)頭要表示悲痛的心情，談?wù)勀転樗麄冏鲂┦裁�，并鼓�?lì)他們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)、相信新校園、新家園會(huì)有的。注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用第一人稱來(lái)敘述。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：I’m sorry to hear that，等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過(guò)渡詞如：Secondly, Thirdly,等。