Question

下文中共有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

  增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

  刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

  修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

  注意：1．每句不超過兩個錯誤；

    2．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

3．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

     Three weeks ago I bought the electronic dictionary at a shop. But I hadn't used it for several day while I found it didn't work. So I went to the shop, but only to be told that the problem could not be solved unless it was sent back the factory where it was made .Then I did as I was told without any delay. Unfortunately, the factory promised to repair the dictionary and sent it back in a week. Two weeks has past, but I haven't yet received one. l have no idea ,why things are like this. I'm looking forward to receive my dictionary as soon as possible.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 the → an

 day  → days

 while  → when / before

 去掉but

 加上to

 Unfortunately  → Fortunately

 sent  → send

 past  → passed

 one  → it

 receive → receiving

【解析】

試題分析：

 Three weeks ago I bought the electronic dictionary at a shop. 改為an。三周前買了一個電子詞典。“電子詞典”是泛指，應該使用不定冠詞。

 But I hadn't used it for several day… 改為days。several：幾個，后接名詞復數。

 But I hadn't used it for several days while I found it didn't work. 改為when或before。題意：我還沒用幾天，詞典就壞了。had (not) done sth. before / when …是固定句式，意為“剛……就 ……”。

 So I went to the shop, but only to be told… 去掉but。作者回到購買電子詞典的商店，只是被告知必須將電子詞典寄回原產廠家才能解決問題。only to do sth.表示“意外的結果”。

 …the problem could not be solved unless it was sent back ∧ the factory where it was made.加上to。send sth. back to sb.將某物送/寄還某人。

 Unfortunately, the factory promised to repair the dictionary… 改為Fortunately。所幸工廠答應修理。

 …promised to repair the dictionary and sent it back in a week. 改為send。promise后接to repair …和to send…兩個不定式做賓語。

 Two weeks has past, … 改為passed。 passed為動詞過去分詞，與has構成現在完成時；past是介詞。

 … but I haven't yet received one. 改為it。it指送修的電子詞典，是同一指代；one是同類指代，即同樣的事物，而非同一個事物。

 I'm looking forward to receive my dictionary as soon as possible. 改為receiving。look forward to (doing) sth. 期待（做）某事，to是介詞。

考點：短文改錯。