Question

假如你是王婷，就個(gè)人愛(ài)好帶來(lái)的困惑給你的筆友David發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯。
3. 條理清楚，詞句連貫
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名和人名。

Dear David,
I’m writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know what to do with it and need your help.
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Yours,
Wangting

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know what to do with it and need your help.
I like watching TV, especially I am interested in game shows. I hope I can answer all the questions correctly and win the prize. But my parents don’t allow me to watch TV. They think watching Tv is a waste of time. They are also afraid I can’t put all my heart into the study. Instead, I think game shows are including a lot of knowledge.  For example, they can exercise a person’s thinking ability and reaction ability.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Wangting

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中多次使用主從復(fù)合句，增加了不少文采。如：I hope I can answer all the questions correctly and win the prize. They are also afraid I can’t put all my heart into the study. Instead, I think game shows are including a lot of knowledge.