Question

每位同學都有自己喜歡的老師，請你根據下列提示，以My teacher為題介紹一位你喜歡
的老師。
提示：1．外貌特征；      2．興趣愛好和性格特點；
3．你對他（她）的感情。
要求：1. 表達清楚、語句通順、意思連貫；
2. 應用提示中的所有信息，并適當發揮；
3. 60詞以上。
My teacher
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Answer 1

My teacher
I have a good teacher. She is a tall woman with black hair. She is a little fat. She has two big eyes and a small nose. She likes smiling. She is very kind and patient to us. And at the same time, she is strict in class. After class, she likes singing and playing with us. I like her very much. I think she is a very good teacher, and I want to be a teacher like her when I grow up.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以My teacher 為題，寫一篇作文來介紹自己最喜歡的老師。題目中給了我們一些提示，我們可以從這幾個方面來介紹。一是老師的外貌特征，如高矮、胖瘦，頭發，五官等方面來介紹；二是老師的興趣愛好和性格特點，如老師喜歡什么，不喜歡什么，對學生如何等；三是你對老師的感情，這一部分要說明自己喜歡老師的原因。這些描述人的外貌和性格的句型，我們在教材中都有過接觸，所以表達的時候應該問題不大。但是要注意語句間的連接，以及表達的流暢。
【亮點說明】這是一篇優秀的范文。作者從三個方面介紹了自己喜歡的老師。首先是外貌描寫，She is a tall woman with black hair. She is a little fat. She has two big eyes and a small nose.這幾句話語法運用正確，描寫的很細致。然后作者介紹了老師的興趣愛好和性格特點，She likes smiling. She is very kind and patient to us. And at the same time, she is strict in class. After class, she likes singing and playing with us，這里使用的句型有be kind to sb., like doing sth., be strict with sb. 等。最后是自己對老師的感情，I like her very much. I think she is a very good teacher, and I want to be a teacher like her when I grow up.，最后這個句子中使用了when 引導的時間狀語從句，是一個很好的句型。