Question

衛生健康飲食：健康一直是人們關注的問題我校要舉行以“關愛健康”為題的主題班會，請根據下表內容談談你的看法，寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。
（1）保持健康的重要性（2）保持健康的方法（3）保持健康的結論
（4） （你的看法？）1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強體;3.鄙棄不良習慣
                                                                             
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

Dear boys and girls：
I’m talking about how to keep health/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise， eat more junk food， and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit， my advices are as
follow：
Firstly， we must keep taking exercises every day ， and eat lots of fruit and vegetables 。 Secondly， try to sleep for about 8 hours a night， and remember to “early to bed early to rise”。 Finally， stay away from cigarettes / smoking/ drugs毒品。 Besides（除此之外）， don’t forget to breathe （呼吸）the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.
That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹保持健康的重要性和方法并得出結論。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態，關鍵詞匯等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。寫作中注意使用連接詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了合適的連詞而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如Firstly ，Secondly ，Finally， Besides，等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。