Question

如今很多學(xué)校和家庭都支持學(xué)生住校，他們認(rèn)為相比走讀而言，住校更有利于學(xué)生的發(fā)展。你也同意他們的觀點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下提示，談?wù)勛⌒５暮锰帯?br />提示：
1．節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力，專注學(xué)習(xí)。
2．學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活，照顧自己。
3．與同學(xué)相處，增進(jìn)了解。
要求：
1．適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
2．字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。
Now many schools and families think living in school is better for students . I agree with them .       
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

First of all , if we live in school , we can save a lot of time and energy so that we can concentrate more on our study . Second , we can learn how to took after ourselves instead of depending on our parents . We will become stronger and grow up more quickly . Finally , we can learn how to get along with our classmates . We can know more about each other and understand each other well .
In a word , living in school will help us in many ways not only in study .

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。所給要點(diǎn)清晰明了。在寫作中要注意使用準(zhǔn)確的語言將這些要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，不遺漏任何一個(gè)。當(dāng)然也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但一定不能脫離本題的話題。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可以以第一人稱寫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文作者使用了First of all、Second、finally等詞，使得文章非常條理。