Question

根據(jù)提示寫作。(10分)
1．上周六你和同學(xué)們?nèi)ズ�邊野炊�?nbsp;       2．早上8點公園門口集合，8點半出發(fā)(start)。
3．到達(dá)時已11點，生火做飯，食物美味。 4．下午，做游戲，打排球，在湖里劃船。
5．4點半到家，很累，但玩得開心。       6．希望……

Answer 1

Last Saturday my classmates and I went camping by the lake.We met at the park gate at 8 in the morning and started at 8.We arrived  there at 11 and made a fire.The food was delicious so we like it. In the afternoon,we played games and went boating on the lake.At about 4：30，we went home .We were very tired but had so much fun.We hope we can go caming there again.

試題分析：本題給出大量的信息，包括活動時間、集合時間、出發(fā)時間以及返回時間；集合地點、活動地點；活動內(nèi)容等，注意將這些內(nèi)容介紹清楚。寫作中注意用詞準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清楚，并注意句子的時態(tài)一般用過去式。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：We met at the park gate at 8 in the morning and started at 8. We were very tired but had so much fun.We hope we can go caming there again.等，短文用了一些連詞，使句子的結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化，提醒學(xué)生在日常學(xué)習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型。