Question

上周日，Mary度過了忙碌的一天。請根據下表中Mary周日的行程，寫一寫Mary在忙的時候，你在做什么？（詞數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）

9:00 am	10:00 am	2:00 – 3:00 pm	4:00 pm	7:00 pm
read English	do math homework	have a piano lesson	visit friends	help mom cook dinner

 
At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV .
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

At 9:00 , While Mary was reading English , I was listening to the English news on TV "At 10,while Mary was doing her math homework, I was listening to music. At 2:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was having a piano lesson, I was visiting my grandmother. We went to the farm and fed the chickens. At 4:00 in the afternoon , while Mary was visiting her friends , I was going fishing by the river. It was relaxing. At 7:00 in the afternoon, while Mary was helping her mom cook dinner, I was watching the stars in the sky ,They were beautiful.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的時態，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如We went to the farm and fed the chickens..等。They were beautiful.等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。
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