Question

今年，第二屆夏季青年奧運(yùn)會(huì)（Youth Olympic Games）將在南京舉辦。假如你叫周明，是一名九年級(jí)的學(xué)生，你想申請(qǐng)做一名自愿者。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一份簡(jiǎn)介，介紹自己。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示如下：
16歲，南京出身，現(xiàn)居無(wú)錫，今年畢業(yè)；
今年夏天青奧會(huì)將在南京舉辦，其目標(biāo)是讓世界各地的青年了解奧林匹克精神。
你想做一名志愿者。你組織能力強(qiáng)，曾經(jīng)……
如果能被接受，你會(huì)……
注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2. 第3、4要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容須用2～3句話展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Sir,
I am a student in Grade Nine. My name is Zhou Ming.
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Yours sincerely
Zhou Ming

Answer 1

I am 16 years old I was born in Nanjing.But I live in Wuxi now.I will finish/leave school/graduate this year.The 2^nd Youth Olympic will be held in Nanjing next year.One purpose of the games is to let the teenagers around/throughout the world learn more about the spirit of Olympic/ Olympic spirit.I want to be a volunteer.I am organized./I can organize things well.I have organized many school activities successfully.If I can be a volunteer.I will try my best to help you as much as I can.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】亮點(diǎn)一：One purposeof the games is to let the teenagers around the world learn more about the spirit of Olympic。比賽的一個(gè)目的是讓世界各地的青少年了解奧運(yùn)精神。
亮點(diǎn)二:If I can be a volunteer, I will try my best to help you as much as I can.如果我可以成為一名志愿者，我會(huì)盡我最大的努力盡我所能幫助你。