Question

中考將近，而9年級學生Daniel卻遇到了一些問題，準備向21世紀英文報的“知心大姐”欄目反映一下，并希望得到幫助．（14分）
假設你是Daniel．請你用英語給該報“知心大姐”欄目寫一封信，希望得到幫助．問題如下：
(1)作業太多，時常熬夜，感到疲勞，尤其是在課堂里就想睡覺；
(2)不知如何處理學習與課余活動之間的矛盾，感到焦慮；
(3)有時甚至與朋友爭吵，感覺不開心；
(4)父母只關心考試分數，很少與自己交流，也不關心自己的感受．
注意：
(1)80詞左右．開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數．
(2)可適當發揮，使行文通順連貫．
Dear agony aunt，
I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．
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Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Daniel

Answer 1

Dear agony aunt，
I’m a Grade 9 student．These days I have some problems，and I don’t know how to deal with them．
First I have a lot of homework to do every day, so I often stay up late to complete it.  As a result, I feel tired. Second, I don’t know how to achieve a balance between study and play, That’s why I feel stressed from time to time. What’s worse, I sometimes quarrel with my friends, and that makes me feel bad. Besides, my parents care only about the marks and we seldom communicate with each other.
Can you offer me some suggestions? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Daniel

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目所給要點比較詳細，在寫作時一定要把每個要點都表達出來，當然也可圍繞主題適當發揮。在寫作時可以適當使用連接詞，使上下文緊湊，密切關聯。本文可以第一人稱書寫，主要使用一般現在時態。
【亮點說明】該文使用了first、second、what’s more、besides等詞，為文章增色不少。