Question

中國夢是目前較熱的話題，你們班級對夢想這個話題也進行了一次討論。請你以“My dream”為題，寫一篇短文。要點如下：
1、人人都有夢想，夢想可大可小。其實，大夢想就是由許多小的夢想構成的。
2、作為中學生，我們有各種各樣的夢想。這些夢想就是我們的中國夢。
3、我們應該努力實現夢想，遇到困難時也不放棄夢想。
4、我的夢想是…… 
注意：1）文章必須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫。
2）第4要點需用2到3句話做適當發揮。
3）詞數80左右。(給出的內容不計入總詞數)
My dream
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Answer 1

My dream
Everyone has his dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. As middle school students, we have all kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. We should try our best to make our dreams come true. When we meet any difficulty, we won’t give up our dreams.（I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream.）

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫作者的夢想是什么，全文以一般現在時態為主。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如In fact ,is made up of，all kinds of， try our best to，come true，give up， dream of， From now on等短語，狀語從句When we meet any difficulty；并列句The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. 文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。