Question

書面表達(dá)(15分)
請(qǐng)從90后(post-90)初中生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行客觀地描述，然后制定個(gè)人將來的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃。

具體要求：
1 目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃要展開合理想象并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2語句通順，意思連貫．條理清楚，字跡工整。
3詞數(shù)80左右。
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

As post-90 students, we are often willing to help others who are in trouble. We are active and  very interested in everything new. We not only like to do things differently but also have many hobbies. We are easy to get excited and angry.   We often make the same mistakes because we are very careless. Sometimes we only think about our own  feelings. My dream is to be a teacher. I have tried my best to keep a balance between study and hobbies.  I believe my dream will come true.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。先后寫90后學(xué)生的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，然后提出自己的目標(biāo)和計(jì)劃。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如be willing to,be interested in, not only...but also,make  mistakes,try one’s best等短語，文中還用到了原因狀語從句 because we are very careless；賓語從句my dream will come true；定語從句who are in trouble;不定式做表語to get excited and angry，to be a teacher 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。