Question

短文改錯。
     假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文
中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
     增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
     刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉。
     修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
     注意：
     1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Jim,
     I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.
     You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be
three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings have been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are
rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books,
newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical
instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted
a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.
     I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.
                                                     Yours,
                                                      Li Hua
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Answer 1

Jim,
I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.
                                                           1. writing
You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three
                                                 2. 去掉                                           3. no
years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new
                                   4. was
buildings had been built and are on use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms
                                               5. in                                                                   6. which
for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books,

newspapers and magazines. However, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical
                                          7. Besides                    8. well
instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted
                                                                                                                                         9. have
a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school ∧become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.
                            10. will
                                                     Yours,
                                                      Li Hua