Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Our class recently has had a heated discussion about if the historic old buildings should be tear down. Opinions varies from one to another. Some students support the protection of those buildings so they are carriers of history through which the future generations can deep understand the development of our city. Beside, the historic old buildings can also arouse people’s love for the city.

    In the contrary, some other students think that the old buildings may hold back the development of economy and the process of modernization. It may affect the beauty of the city.

As far I’m concerned, I approve of the former opinion. But if a building is worth of little, it may be proper to demolish(摧毀) it and make better use of that area. We should just weight the advantages and disadvantages.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 if改成weather,

 tear 改成torn;  

 varies改成vary,      

 so改成because, 

 deep改成deeply；

 Beside改成Besides,     

 In the contrary改成On the contrary；

 As far I’m concerned改成As far as I’m concerned；

 worth of little改成worth little；

 weight改成weigh  

【解析】

 if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句不能放在介詞后面。

 本句是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，應(yīng)該使用過去分詞。

 opinions是主語(yǔ)，是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用復(fù)數(shù)。

 后面是解釋原因的句子。

 修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞。 

 副詞besides而且，表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。

 固定詞組On the contrary恰恰相反。

 固定結(jié)構(gòu)As far as I’m concerned在我看來(lái)；

 

 worth后面可以直接加代詞。

 動(dòng)詞weigh表示衡量；