Question

你是校報(bào)英語版編輯Jack Smith，主要負(fù)責(zé)“你問我答”專欄，請(qǐng)就中學(xué)生李華的來信作答，給出適當(dāng)建議。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m a Senior 3 student. I have to take English exams every two weeks. But the results are always discouraging in spite of my great efforts. I don't know why. I 'm afraid something is wrong with my English learning method. What’s worse, before each exam, I'm always feeling nervous and cannot sleep well. Could you give me some suggestions?

Li Hua

注意：

針對(duì)提出問題，給出信息完整的建議；

適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

詞數(shù)：100左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people.

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Sincerely yours,

Jack Smith

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

 Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people. However, there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

    Firstly, obtain as large a vocabulary as possible. It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect. Therefore, doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing. In this way you are sure to improve your English.

    As for examination anxiety, it’s unnecessary for you to work too late before the exam. Instead, you’d better go to bed earlier than usual, otherwise you would feel tired the next day. It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep.

    In addition, consult your teachers if necessary.

I do hope my advice is helpful to you.

Sincerely yours,

Jack Smith

【解析】

試題分析：動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。作文要層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，表達(dá)流暢，切合作文要求，句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級(jí)詞匯及句型。英語寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語態(tài)的使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如. overcome these difficulties.；It is a good habit to do some reading every day；Practice makes perfect..；it’s unnecessary for you to work too late before the exam.還運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如：However，F(xiàn)irstly, Instead ，In addition等等。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。