Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

Dear Ari,

     As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.

     I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.

     Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.

     Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.

     And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.

      Love,

      Daddy

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

    假設(shè)你就是信中的Ari，父親在你出生的時(shí)候?qū)懥诉@封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你準(zhǔn)備以寫(xiě)信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內(nèi)容(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好)：

1．以約30個(gè)詞概括父親在他信中對(duì)你的期望；

2．以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：

(1)讀信后的感受；

(2)以你自己成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷說(shuō)明你的感受；

(3)表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感激和祝福。

 [寫(xiě)作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接    引用原文中的句子；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

 [評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]

概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version

Dear Daddy,

Tonight is your 50th birthday,and I haven’t really got the chance to say all of my thanks I want to tell you.I read your letter you wrote to me when I was born 18 years ago.You gave me the name “Ari” and hoped I would be brave and responsible to the sociality.I was so moved by your deepest love to me.And I love you too Daddy.

When I was a primary school student,you always encouraged me to do well in school and each evening I was asked to present at least one new thing I had learned that day.You told me that I could be whatever I wanted to be,as long as I got good grades and continued my education.When I met some difficulties,you inspired me to face it bravely and solve it by my own brightness and effort.

Thanks for supporting me over the last 18 years of my life.Thanks for all the advice and knowledge over the years.Thanks for showing me,that even you,are not perfect.Thank dad,I wish you a healthy body and a happy life.

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