Question

第二節(jié)書面表達（共1題，滿分25分）

假設你叫劉明，高三學生，即將參加高考。你的英語其他題都做得不錯，但是作文總是寫不好。你給在你學校工作過的外籍老師David英語寫作這一問題向他請教，并請他幫忙批改你附上的作文，指出問題的所在，怎么改進。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.在內容上允許適當發(fā)揮;

3.參考詞匯：附 attached to

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m in Senior 3 now and I’m preparing for the coming college entrance examination. I’m sure I can answer all the questions in NMET except the writing. I have put my heart into English writing, but I still don’t know how to write a good composition. What shall I do? You know, the college entrance examination is very important. I’m getting more and more worried with the time passing by. So I want to get some help from you. I believe you are kind enough to help, aren’t you? The composition attached to the Email is one of mine. Would you please correct it, point out the mistakes and tell me how to improve my writing? Thank you!

Yours,

Liu Ming

【解析】略