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第二卷
第四部分 寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）
第一節(jié)   短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Today is Sunday．The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life．At about 9:00 a．m, I go to the bookstore with my friends．There was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because these books were all useful to me．At last, I chose two．At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was very popular．It took us about 3 hours to see．Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moved．Some friends even burst out tears．From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable．That’s a really wonderful film．It is very worth seeing again．What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

Answer 1

Today is Sunday．The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life．At about
is
9:00 a．m, I go to the bookstore with my friends．There was a lot of new
went                              were
books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because these books were both useful
all
to me．At last, I chose two．At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling
called
Titanic was very popular．It took us about 3 hours to see∧．Having seen the
it
film, and everyone was deeply moved．Some friends even burst out tears．
去掉and                                into或tears→crying
From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable．That’s a really
wonderful film．It is very worth seeing again．What a happy day! I hope
well
tomorrow I will be even happy!
Happier

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