Question

【題目】寫作(共兩節，滿分35分)

第一節 短文改錯(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Have you ever gone to a music festival? During a summer holiday in Hungary, I went to attend my the first music festival. It was really an excitement to us! Since 2002 the Sziget Festival had been running every year in Budapest. It lasts for a week, which famous singers and bands from around the world perform very brilliant. In Hungarian the word ‘sziget’ mean island, which is a very appropriate name although the festival takes place on a large island in the middle of the Danube River in Budapest. Thousands people come on special “party trains” from other country such as France and Italy.

Answer 1

【答案】

Have you ever to a music festival? During a summer holiday in Hungary, I went to attend my the first music festival. It was really an excitement to ! Since 2002 the Sziget Festival been running every year in Budapest. It lasts for a week, famous singers and bands from around the world perform very . In Hungarian the word ‘sziget’ island, which is a very appropriate name the festival takes place on a large island in the middle of the Danube River in Budapest. Thousands people come on special “party trains” from other such as France and Italy.

【解析】

第一處：句意：你曾經參加過音樂會嗎？此處表示“去過”；而have/ has gone to…表示“去了某地”。故gone改為 been。

第二處：此處表示“我的第一次音樂會”，序數詞前面有my，不能再用the。故去掉my后面的the。

第三處：文章的主語是第一人稱I，此處表示“對我來說很興奮”。故us 改為 me。

第四處：根據時間狀語“Since 2002”可知，句子用現在完成時。故had改為 has。

第五處：本句運用了定語從句，先行詞是a week，而引導詞在定語從句中作時間狀語，表示“在那段時間”；或者前后兩句是并列關系。故which 改為when/and。

第六處：修飾動詞perform要用副詞。故brilliant 改為brilliantly 。

第七處：本句的主語the word ‘sziget’是單數，所以謂語用單數。故mean改為 means。

第八處：“the festival takes place on a large island in the middle of the Danube River in Budapest.”是前一句的原因。故although 改為 because/since/as。

第九處：thousands 后面加上of是固定搭配，thousands of前面無明確數字，表示“數以千計的、成千上萬的”。故thousands 后面加上of。

第十處：根據后面的“such as France and Italy”可知，此處的“其他的國家”是復數。country改為countries。