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【題目】假段定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有

10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處

加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Some peoples hold opinion that wealth can bring happiness to them. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honesty labor. They work hardly and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleasing. Even their spend money is a kind of happiness.

But some people believe wealth can’t bring him happiness. For example, when one makes a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth for him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.

In my opinion, I think there is no doubt whether wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remember： money is not anything。

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】第一行peoples 改為people

【2】第一行 opinion 前加an

【3】第二行honesty 該為honest

【4】第二行hardly改為hard

【5】第三行pleasing改為pleased

【6】第四行 spend 改為spending

【7】第五行him 改為them

【8】第七行for 改為with

【9】第九行whether 改為that

【10】第十行anything改為everything

【解析】

【1】第一行peoples 改為people，單復(fù)數(shù)同形

【2】第一行 opinion 前加 an ，hold an opinion 為一詞組，意為持有某種觀點，意見

【3】第二行honesty 該為honest 。 honesty 是名詞，此處應(yīng)該用形容詞honest做定語。

【4】第二行hardly改為hard . work hard 努力工作，hardly 幾乎不的意思。

【5】第三行為非謂語動詞錯誤。pleasing改為pleased , feel pleased 感到高興

【6】第四行 spend 改為spending .動名詞做主語。

【7】第五行 人稱代詞錯誤。將him 改為them。指代前面出現(xiàn)的some people為復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【8】第七行，介詞誤用。 將for 改為with。Share something with somebody 為固定詞組， 同某人分享某物。

【9】第九行 whether 改為that. 引導(dǎo)同位語從句。there is no doubt 后面接同位語從句，表示肯定，不懷疑，用連詞that 引導(dǎo)。

【10】第十行 將anything改為everything 該句為部分否定。