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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job, she has to do most of the . She is a great mother. Both Dad I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then wentshopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes I cooked were Mom’s . At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and .

【解析】

【1】句意：媽媽有一個全職工作，但是她不得不做多數的家務。此處表示轉折關系，故把so改為but。

【2】housework是不可數名詞，故把houseworks改為housework。

【3】or→and固定搭配：both…and…兩個都……，故把or改為nd。

【4】句意：在母親節的早上我們起床很早。此處用一般過去時態，故把get改為got。

【5】固定詞組：go shopping 去購物。故去掉on。

【6】句意：在爸爸手里。故把her改為his。

【7】句意：我在廚房里做飯。此處特指在廚房里，故在in和kitchen之間加the。

【8】此處考查引導定語從句的關系代詞。句意：我做的菜是媽媽最喜歡的。the dishes作先行詞，指物，定語從句缺少引導詞，從句缺少賓語，可知引導詞在定語從句中作賓語，故把what改為that/which(或去掉what)。

【9】“favorite”本身就是“最喜歡”，故把favoritest改為favorite。

【10】句意：媽媽既感激又感動。故把moving改為moved。

【歸納拓展】

表示情感的現在分詞和過去分詞

surprising令人驚訝的，surprised感到驚訝；

frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕；

moving令人感動的， moved 感動；

exciting 令人興奮的，excited 感到興奮；

boring令人厭煩的， bored感到厭煩；

annoying令人煩惱的，annoyed感到煩惱的。現在分詞的主語通常指事物；過去分詞的主語通常指人。