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【題目】短文改錯

It is no doubt that health is the most important thing in our life. As a Chinese proverb go, ＂Health is blessing＂. Should we be always ill in bed, how can we enjoy life?

To keep healthy, we must develop a healthy way of life. First of all, we should keep on doing sports on a regularly basis, because it can strengthen both our body and mind, refresh ourselves and making us work more efficiently. Secondly, we must keep balanced diet to provide our body with various nutrition we need, but we should refuse junk food. Remember, it is through the mouth where diseases enter into our body. Thirdly, a good sleep is also vital to our health. Stay up too late at night often results in poor health. As middle school students, we need better sleep to do better in our lessons.

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【答案】

is no doubt that health is the most important thing in our life. As a Chinese proverb , ＂Health is blessing＂. Should we be always ill in bed, how we enjoy life?

To keep healthy, we must develop a healthy way of life. First of all, we should keep on doing sports on a basis, because it can strengthen both our body and mind, refresh ourselves and us work more efficiently. Secondly, we must keep balanced diet to provide our body with various nutrition we need, we should refuse junk food. Remember, it is through the mouth diseases enter into our body. Thirdly, a good sleep is also vital to our health. up too late at night often results in poor health. As middle school students, we need better sleep to do better in our lessons.

【解析】第一處：It→There 此處為固定句式There is no doubt that毫無疑問的是……，故將It改為There。

第二處：go→goes 句意：正如一句中國諺語所說……。本句描述的是客觀事實，故用一般現在時態。主語proverb為單數名詞，故謂語動詞用第三人稱單數。

第三處：can→could 句意：我們怎么享受我們的生活。should位于句首，在此處是虛擬語氣。how could…經常用作表示語氣強烈或是責備，how can…只表示根據客觀事實的判斷。故將can改為could。

第四處：regularly→regular 聯系下文basis(基礎)可知，此處用形容詞作定語。故將regularly改為regular。

第五處：making→make 此處make和前文strength、refresh同為并列謂語，故也用動詞形。

第六處：keep后加a 聯系下文＂balanced diet＂可知，此處指的是保持一個均衡的飲食，故加不定冠詞。balanced詞首音素是輔音，故不定冠詞用a。

第七處：but→and 句意：并且我們應該拒絕垃圾食品。聯系上下文可知，前后為順接關系，but但是，表示轉折關系。故改為and。

第八處：where→that 本句為強調句，強調疾病是通過口腔進入我們的身體的。故用that構成強調句型的基本框架。

第九處：去掉into enter進入，及物動詞，后面直接接賓語。

第十處：Stay→Staying 句意：在晚上熬夜經常會導致身體不適。根據語境可知，此處用動名詞作主語。故將Stay改為Staying。