Question

【題目】【2015·福建】

書面表達(滿分25分）

請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數為120左右的短文。

內容包括：

1. 描述畫面；

2. 概述其含義；

3. 談談個人感想。

鑿壁偷光

注意：

1. 短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數；

2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫；

3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息；

參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：bore

In the picture,

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Answer 1

【答案】

In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be

Of course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本題為看圖寫作，主題是古時候的一則成語“鑿壁偷光”。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結構要恰當，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應用文寫作對于文章內容的要求是要達到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。

【亮點分析】

文章第一段描述圖片，第一句中用到了動詞ing形式的非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語和with 的復合結構In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.圖中我們可以看見一個男孩穿著破舊的衣服坐在一個堆滿書的桌子旁邊。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一絲微弱的光亮從墻上的一個小洞穿過，他沉靜在自己的閱讀中。

第二段第一句開始說這個圖片的主題。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.這是一個眾人周知的中國古代成語。第二句也是用了一個分詞結構表示伴隨狀語The boy, being poor ,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour ‘s house to read at night.這個貧窮的男孩甚至不能夠買得起一根蠟燭，于是他把墻鑿了一個洞，從他鄰居那里偷了一些光在夜晚閱讀。第二段最后一句用了一個no matter引導的讓步狀語從句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遺余力的獲取知識，并且不管有多么困難的情況從不輕易氣餒。

第三段結束Of course, things are totally different today .當然，現在可完全不同了。第二句是一個not… but 結構以及賓語從句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是這個故事本身而是這個故事反映出來的東西才是重要的。俗語：Hard work pays off.功夫不負有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我們應該帶著苦來通過學習來改進自己并且為未來做準備。