Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we are little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drink this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we little kids. What we can learn from the story is we must be honest. , there're lots of of dishonesty nowadays.

Being does great harm to other people to yourself. Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, badly affected their health. To my great relief, the producers got so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

【解析】

第一處：根據(jù)主句的時(shí)態(tài)以及句子的意思可知，此處用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。故are改為were。

第二處：分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，“we must be honest.”在is后面作表語(yǔ)從句，句子成份和意思完整，由that引起，不能省去。故is后加that。

第三處：前后兩句是句意的轉(zhuǎn)折。故Therefore改為However。

第四處：case是可數(shù)名詞，在lots of 后面跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故case改為cases。

第五處：句意：不誠(chéng)實(shí)對(duì)他人和對(duì)自己都是有害的。故honest改為dishonest。

第六處：此處并非選擇關(guān)系，而是并列關(guān)系。句意：不誠(chéng)實(shí)對(duì)他人和對(duì)自己都是有害的。故or改為and。

第七處：for example是固定搭配，是“例如”的意思。故去掉an。

第八處：根據(jù)句意可知，在此after是介詞，后面跟動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)。故drink改為drinking。

第九處：本句運(yùn)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是主句“the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin”，用which引導(dǎo)，指代主句。故what改為which。

第十處：此處是被動(dòng)的含義。故punishing改為punished。