Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The summer holiday is coming. Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenience and comfortable. What’s more, they can to save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world. Besides, others prefer to go out for traveling, that can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money or meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much good to stay at home, for I can do how I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and help my parents with the housework.

Answer 1

【答案】

The summer holiday is coming. Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both and comfortable. What’s more, they can to save money for other purposes. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world. , others prefer to go out for traveling, can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much to stay at home, for I can do I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and my parents with the housework.

【解析】

第一處：主語是Our class，這里表示班級的同學，表示復數概念，謂語用復數。故has改成have。

第二處：和comfortable并列作表語。故convenience改成convenient。

第三處：情態動詞后直接跟動詞原形，所以刪除to。

第四處：特指＂了解外面世界的機會＂，用定冠詞。故lose后面接the。

第五處：句意：然而，其他人更喜歡出去旅游。表示轉折關系，而且和后面的句子有逗號隔開，用副詞。故Besides改成However。

第六處：引導非限制性定語從句，指代前面的句子，用關系代詞which。

第七處：他們會花費更多的錢和遇到一些困難。表示并列關系，用and。

第八處：much修飾形容詞比較級。故good改成better。

第九處：do后面是賓語從句，賓語從句缺少賓語，用what引導賓語從句。故how改成what。

第十處：和reading books, watching TV并列作賓語應用動名詞。故help改成helping。