Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear guests,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are luck to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities. As planning, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program was to develop our interest in English learning and practically abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists in the following activity: recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on. The show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, we are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will be benefit from your presence but I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.

Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear guests,

On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities. As , we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program to develop our interest in English learning and abilities in listening and speaking. The program consists the following : recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on. The show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.

Thank you.

【解析】

第一處：luck→lucky 考查形容詞。be是系動詞，接形容詞構成系表結構，故luck改為lucky。

第二處：middle前加the 考查冠詞。in the middle of…＂在……中間＂，是固定詞組，故middle前加the。

第三處：planning→planned 考查狀語從句的省略。在狀語從句中，如果主從句的主語一致或者從句的主語是it，且從句含有be的形式，省略從句的主語和be動詞的形式。As planned相當于As it is planned，故planning改為planned。

第四處：was→is 考查動詞的時態。句意：這個節目的目的是培養我對英語學習的興趣，并練習聽說能力。根據語境可知，此處講述現在的事情，用一般現在時，故was改為is。

第五處：practically→practical 考查形容詞。修飾名詞用形容詞作定語，此處practical修飾名詞abilities作定語，故practically改為practical。

第六處：in→of 考查介詞。句意：這個項目由下面這些活動組成。consist of＂由……組成＂是固定搭配，consist in的意思是＂在于……＂。故in改為of。

第七處：activity→activities 考查名詞。activity＂活動＂是可數名詞，根據下文recitation, singing, word spelling, storytelling and so on可知此處講述有許多活動，故用復數。故activity改為activities。

第八處：we→you 考查代詞。根據語境可知句意為：親愛的客人們，歡迎你們參加活動。故we改為you。

第九處：去掉benefit前的be 考查動詞。句意：我希望我們學生從你的參與中受益。benefit＂受益＂是動詞，與主語we是主動關系，用主動語態。故去掉benefit前的be。

第十處：but→and 考查連詞。上文＂我希望我們學生從你的參與中受益＂與下文＂我真誠地希望你與我們在一起過得愉快＂是順承關系，故but改為and。