Question

【題目】Correction 1(2017屆黑龍江省大慶實驗中學高三仿真模擬)

I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.

Answer 1

【答案】

I was riding in a taxi to the bus station from there I was supposed to a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the to perform an act of kindness. I to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the smile light up his face, made me feel my heart filled with happiness.

【解析】

【文章大意】作者乘出租車去公共汽車站。到站后，作者將準備好自己路上吃的巧克力全部送給了出租車司機。作者為自己這樣的善意行為感到開心。

第一處：but改為so或and。 考查并列連詞。此處前后兩句是因果或順承關系，故用so/and。

第二處：taking改為take。 考查動詞短語。be supposed to do sth.是固定結構，表示＂理應做某事＂。

第三處：be后加a。 考查冠詞。名詞journey是可數名詞，該處泛指＂一個很長的旅途＂，應用不定冠詞a。

第四處：去掉have后的been。 考查語態。pack是及物動詞，其后有賓語chocolates，故應用主動語態，去掉been。

第五處：in改為on。 考查介詞。on the way表示＂在路上＂，in the way表示＂擋住去路＂。

第六處：them改為it�？疾榇�詞。指代前面的單數名詞suitcase，應用單數代詞it。

第七處：opportunity改為opportunities。 考查名詞。one of 后應用可數名詞的復數形式，故opportunity改為opportunities。

第八處：want改為wanted。 考查時態。全文整體時態是一般過去時，故此處應用一般過去時。

第九處：brightly改為bright。 考查形容詞。名詞smile應用形容詞作定語修飾，故將brightly改為bright。

第十：what改為which。 考查定語從句。引導非限制性定語從句，指代前面整句話的內容應用關系代詞which。