Question

假如在英語課上，老師請你們就“Lucky Money(壓歲錢)”這個話題分組進行討論，但你認為同學們對“Hobbies（愛好）”更感興趣，建議老師更換話題。請你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫一份發(fā)言稿，談一談你的理由。

提示：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies?

(2) What’s your reason for not talking about lucky money?

要求：（1）發(fā)言稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。

（2）發(fā)言稿中不得涉及真實的人名、校名和地名。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

（3）詞數(shù)：60~80。

參考詞匯: one’s own hobby, a proper topic(合適的話題), personal, unhappy

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is easy and interesting. Everyone has his own hobby, like playing ball games, listening to music, drawing and so on. It can bring us pleasure and make us relaxed. We have a lot to say when we talk about it.

Lucky money, however, isn’t a proper topic for us, because it’s too personal. What’s more, not all of us can get lucky money. Some may feel unhappy if we talk about it.

So talking about hobbies is really a good choice.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為簡略。動筆前應先要閱讀材料，讀懂提示中涉及的問題。寫作中注意將自己的觀點和理由介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文涉及過去現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài)的表達，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意在表達觀點時，一些常見句式的應用，注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。