Question

假設你叫王圓，你現(xiàn)在是一名九年級學生,你現(xiàn)在遇到了一個困難，不知如何解決，你要寫信告訴劉老師，他是你們學校的青少年工作者，你希望他給你提供一些建議。字數(shù)在70詞左右。信的要點如下：
你有很多興趣愛好，但你經(jīng)常很忙，找不到足夠的時間來做想做的事。
你不能在學習和興趣愛好兩方面獲得平衡。
3. 所以你感到很有壓力，壓力的來源有：
①老師給你的壓力：家庭作業(yè)
②父母給你的壓力：對你要求嚴格，想你得高分。
③自己給自己的壓力是……（如：想要成為班上最優(yōu)秀的學生）
4. 你想通過多穿白色的衣服來減少壓力，但不是非常有用。
5. 你希望劉老師盡快回信，給你提供意見和幫助。
參考詞匯：壓力pressure
Dear Mr Liu,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don’t know
Yours sincerely
Wang Yuan

Answer 1

Dear Teacher Liu,
My name is WangYuan,and I am a stuent in JuRong No.2 Middle Schoool.I have some problems,and I hope you can help me. I have many hobbies,but I am always busy,I can't find any enough time to do the things what I want to do.I know that it's important to have balance in studying and do the things what I like to do. But I have a lot of homework to do every day. And my parents are strick with me in study because they want me to get good marks. I also want to be a top student in our class. So I feel great pressure.
I want to wear white clothes to make my pressure be less,but it's not very useful. Can you help me?
Yours, WangYuan

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。這種作文主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力。
【亮點說明】這篇短文寫作中注意避免句式重復而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如I can't find any enough time to do the things what I want to do，do the things what I like to do，because,and ,so 等等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。