Question

節(jié)日是我們最喜歡的，節(jié)日期間會(huì)有很多慶祝活動(dòng)。以My Favorite Festival 為題寫一篇60個(gè)詞左右的小短文。

要求：1.字跡工整，請大家不要用涂改液和涂改帶。

2.句子簡潔明了，意思表達(dá)清楚、準(zhǔn)確。

3.注意句子的連貫性和邏輯性。

4.內(nèi)容包括節(jié)日的時(shí)間、節(jié)日之前的準(zhǔn)備工作、禮儀、飲食、禮物和孩子們的活動(dòng)及表現(xiàn)等。

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Answer 1

My favorite festival is New Year’s Day.I don’t have to go to school.I usually spend two hours on my homework and then enjoy myself.

On New Year’s Day morning,my mother goes to buy new clothes for us .She likes shopping best.My father dosen’t have to go to work.I stay at home to play computer games with him. The games are interesting and we get quite happy with friends on line.At noon ,we have a big meal of hamburgers and salad in KFC.I like them very much.And in the afternoon,we go to the countryside to visit my grandparents.I have no time to see them on weekdays. They’re very happy and give me much delicious food.I eat too much and have a stomachache.They all have a good laugh!

What a funny day it is!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文,要求寫一篇自己最喜愛的節(jié)日的短文。故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)確定材料，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這起事件的看法。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的動(dòng)名詞短語，注意動(dòng)名詞表示抽象的反復(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作,如have to，不得不；spend……doing花費(fèi)……做某事；have no time to do沒有時(shí)間做某事等.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。