Question

書面表達（共1題；滿分15分）

    假如你是王勤，請根據以下提示介紹一下你的表哥和他的書房。

    1．你有個表哥，叫Peter。來自上海，現就讀于蘇州陽光中學，喜歡看書；

    2．他有個書房，里面有一書架，上面有許多書；

    3．書架旁可以看到一幅畫，畫中有幾個男孩，他們在河里游泳；

    4．他經常在書房里看書、做作業。很喜歡他的書房。

  要求：

    1．內容必須包括上表中的要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發揮。

    2. 80詞左右，  語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。

My cousin and his study

My name is Wang Qin._________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

　    

                              Peter and his study

  I have a cousin and he is Peter. He is from Shanghai and studies in Suzhou Yangguang Middle School. He likes reading books so he is good at all his subjects.

  He has a study room. There is a bookshelf in his study and there are many books on the shelf. You can see a picture beside the shelf and there are some boys in the picture. The boys are swimming in the river. He often reads books, and does his homework in his study. He likes his study very much.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細但很簡單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要仔細考慮，不可遺漏要點，也可適當發揮。根據材料內容可知，本文以一般現在時態為主，主語是第三人稱。

【亮點說明】這篇文章主要是Peter的書房。作者使用了一般現在時和there be結構，以及現在進行時等，還是用了and，so等連接詞為文章增色不少。對于初一的學生來說，確屬不錯的英語短文了。

考點：話題作文。