Question

很多人認(rèn)為當(dāng)今的中學(xué)生有自己鮮明的特點(diǎn)。他們多才多藝，擅長(zhǎng)琴棋書畫；同時(shí)也常常以自我為中心，很少為他人著想。作為中學(xué)生，你認(rèn)為自己最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明），缺點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明）。你應(yīng)該如何揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，做最好的自己？
要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右。 文章標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。
3．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。
It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points.
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Answer 1

It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.
I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.
Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們對(duì)現(xiàn)在自己的特點(diǎn)寫一篇議論文。現(xiàn)在的中學(xué)生多才多藝，但同時(shí)也有很多缺點(diǎn)，如以自我為中心，不為他人著想等。對(duì)于你自己來(lái)說(shuō)，你身上也會(huì)有優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么，你的缺點(diǎn)又是什么，用例子來(lái)說(shuō)明。另外，怎樣根據(jù)你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，做最好的自己。這個(gè)題目只是給了我們這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容，我們還需自己將它補(bǔ)充完整，使內(nèi)容豐富。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容翻譯出來(lái)，同時(shí)還需注意表達(dá)得完整和流暢，注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作文中作者首先點(diǎn)明了現(xiàn)在中學(xué)生的特點(diǎn)，他們有很多優(yōu)點(diǎn)，但是也有很多缺點(diǎn)。接下來(lái)，作者寫了自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，并舉了一個(gè)實(shí)例來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的這個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)；下一段中作者寫了自己的缺點(diǎn)，也舉例說(shuō)明。最后作者決定發(fā)揚(yáng)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，改正缺點(diǎn)，做更好的中學(xué)生。整篇短文的結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容也很充實(shí)。短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如But they are also thought to be selfish、I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others、I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them.等。