Question

緊張的初三學習就快結束了，同學們在一起討論這個暑假干什么，下面是同學們討論的

結果。請你根據下面的表格把學生們的討論結果寫成一篇短文。

Name	Activities	Reasons
Tina	Go to Beijing	1.To see the Great Wall  and  other beautiful sights in Beijing  2. have fun
Jim	Stay at home	1.Too tired and have a good rest  2. ..
You	….	…..

注意：1. 內容必須包括表格中的信息；

2. 開頭已經為你寫好，你只需接著寫； 

3. 詞數：70個左右。開頭的部分內容不計入總詞數。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to Beijing with her friends. She thinks it’s the capital of China. She wants to see the Great Wall and? it’s very wonderful. She also wants to visit many beautiful sights, like the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. She thinks they will have fun in Beijing. Jim plans to stay at home. After a period of nervous study, it is really tired for him. He plans to have a good rest and help his parents with the housework..? He thinks it makes them happy.

In my opinions, I plan to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and make a good balance between study and rest. Secondly, it is necessary to visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I am willing to do some volunteer work in the Old People’s house. I can’t wait now.?

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心內容。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：1、考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，尤其要注意的是要介紹你本人的活動及原因。2、有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。3、注意字數不能少，當然也不能過多。

【亮點說明】1、短文層次分明，條理清楚，運用一系列副詞first of all, secondly, besides使人一目了然。2、內容健康，積極向上，有一定的導向性，如：平衡學習和休息、拜訪長輩尤其是做志愿者工作。3、短文運用了大量的積極詞匯，比如：In my opinions，first of all，besides等。4、短文內容充實，包含了所有的要點。

考點：圖表作文。