Question

Writing(本題共15分，A題5分，B題10分)
（注意：文中不能出現考生的真實姓名和老師名）
（A）假如你叫林濤，今天早上來上學時，出了一個小事故，你的自行車被一輛小汽車撞了，你從自行車上掉下來。你的腿受了傷，現在在醫院住院。請你具以上內容向你的班主任請假一周。要求簡單明了，內容完整。時間是2013年10月15日。
­­­­ (B) 現在的中學生活潑、開朗，信息量大，接受新事物很快。但是，怎樣做一名好學生,是擺在每個學生面前的課題。請你根據自己及周圍的實際情況，圍繞這一話題，展開思路，談談你的想法。
要求：1.結構完整，語言豐富、表達合理、語法正確。      2. 詞數：80—100詞。
How To Be a Good Student
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Answer 1

（A）Dear Mr Wang,
When I came to school this morning, a small accident happened. I was hit by by a car. I fell off my bike. My leg was injured, now I am in the hospital so I ask for leave one day.
yours
LinTao
(B) How to be a good student
We all hope to become excellent student . However, how to become a good student ?
First of all, we should go to school on time . And we should listen to the teacher in class . We should take notes carefully in class .
Second, we should help the students who need help . We should respect the elder .It is duty to do that.
Third, it is important to have a constructive philosophy of life. If we are defeated, don't be disappointed. Try to face our life and our studies with courage and determination.
In a word, if we  do well in these .We will become good student !

試題分析：第一篇作文是應用文，第二篇是一篇話題作文，自己發揮的空間很大。
【亮點說明】第一篇應用文格式正確，內容簡略而清晰。第二篇敘述的很條理，First of all，Second, Third, In a word,.使文章更富有邏輯。