Question

李明是個很聰明的學生，住在北京，但他有一些不好的習慣，請你根據下面提供的信息，用英文寫一篇短文，并針對他存在的一些問題提出合理的建議。

學習情況	北京陽光中學，七年級一班 ，擅長地理和歷史
外    貌	個子不高，大眼睛，短發，戴眼鏡，總是穿運動鞋，因為輕便舒適
	喜     歡	唱歌、玩電腦游戲，兩餐間喜歡吃零食
不 喜 歡	游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
其它情況	常去他家前面的購物中心，離他家不遠，是一個見朋友的好地方
建    議	至少兩條

具體要求： 

1. 不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。 

2. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。 

3. 內容必須包括以上所有要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發揮。

 Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He is at Beijing Sunshine Middle School.______ 

 

 

He likes singing and ______________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

He often goes to

 

I think _________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

 Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He studies in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.

He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at Geography and History. He isn’t tall. He has big eyes and short hair. He wears glasses. He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable.

He likes singing and playing computer games. He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables. He also dislikes swimming and running.

He often goes to the shopping mall in front of his home. It’s not far away from / near his home. It’s a good place to meet friends.

I think he must change his lifestyle. He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health. He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中出現一些常見短語：is good at 擅長做某事likes singing 喜歡做某事in front of 在。。前面far away from 與。。很遠are good for對。。有好處。He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable這個句子中becaue連接兩個因果關系的句子。He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.這個句子中but表示轉折。He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.這個句子中need是個實義動詞需要，need to do 需要做某事，like是介詞表示 象。。，and連接playing,running并列，所以時態保持一致。

考點： 提綱類作文。