Question

你們班將以夢想為主題舉辦一次演講會(huì)，請你以我的夢想為題寫一篇演講稿，演講應(yīng)包含以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)80-120詞。
What’s your dream?
How will you achieve your dream?
When your dream comes true, what will you do?

Answer 1

My dream is to be a doctor when I grow up. I want to help those sick people.
I know , to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school. I’ll study and do research on different diseases that bring great pains to the patients. After that , if I have a chance, I plan to open a hospital of my own. Then I can help as many as the poor people who have little money to see doctors. I wish everyone in the world can keep healthy and to alive longer.
I believe that I can realize my dream one day if only I insist on working hard and never give up.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文介紹自己的夢想，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，從三個(gè)介紹了自己的夢想，夢想是當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生；怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想；實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想后怎樣做。to achieve my dream, I need study hard now. I hope I can go to a famous university to study medicine after I graduate from the high school.句型的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。