Question

今天你到一家超市購(gòu)物，遇見一群美國(guó)游客，在交談中他們談到明天想去個(gè)園參觀，向你打聽該園的開放時(shí)間及景點(diǎn)等情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容向他們作個(gè)介紹，并順便提醒他們一些你認(rèn)為參觀時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

要   求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。
參考詞匯：四季假山（Four Seasons Rockeries , 公頃(hectare)。
Hi, you guys! Welcome to Yangzhou.
Throughout history, Yangzhou has been famous for its gardens. The Ge Garden …
 
 
 
 
 
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

Answer 1

Hi, you guys! Welcome to Yangzhou.
Throughout history, Yangzhou has been famous for its gardens. The Ge Garden lies in the northeast of ancient Yangzhou city. It covers 2.3 hectares and it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China .You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by youself. When you go out from the south gate of the Ge Garden, you can walk to the Dongguan Street. You can buy some souvenirs there.
By the way, I will tell you something you must remember during your visiting the Ge Garden. You mustn’t make noise in the garden or draw pictures on the wall. At last, you must remember the time of opening the Ge Garden. It is from 7:30a.m to 6:00p.m.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: lies in位于, it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China被譽(yù)為中國(guó)四大名園之一；You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by yourself，not…until句型的運(yùn)用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.