Question

三年的初中生活將結(jié)束，為自己的同學(xué)寫一段畢業(yè)留言不失為一種很好的留念方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容為你的同學(xué)寫一段畢業(yè)留言。
提示：1.他（她）給你留下的深刻印象。2.你們?cè)谝黄鸬目鞓窌r(shí)光。3.對(duì)他（她）最美好的祝福。
要求：1.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書寫規(guī)范。2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。80詞左右。

Answer 1

First ,congratulations on your graduation .
During  this three years, I have been  impressed with your hard-working ,you are so kind that we all like you.I still remember the time we spend together when we spent the weekends on the beach.,Do you remember the day we went to the farm to help the farmers, we had a good time in getting in the crops that day.
At last I hope you will have a bright future .I’m sure you wll go to a top university.

解析這是一篇畢業(yè)留言，也是半開放的作文，要點(diǎn)包括他（她）給你留下的深刻印象。2.你們?cè)谝黄鸬目鞓窌r(shí)光。3.對(duì)他（她）最美好的祝福。所以文章可分三段，其中每個(gè)要點(diǎn)要自己發(fā)揮，要充分發(fā)揮想象，也要根據(jù)自己的初中生活寫出和初中生相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。要注意意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，回憶初中生活的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，要用過去時(shí)，表示愿望時(shí)，要用將來時(shí)。