Question

王林是第一中學(xué)的九年級(jí)的學(xué)生，今年夏天就畢業(yè)了，三年期間王林改變了很多，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記錄王林的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)他未來(lái)的期望。

In the past	1. 性格內(nèi)向，不敢在人前講話。 2. 歷史學(xué)得不好。 3. 不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)，沉迷網(wǎng)上游戲。
At present	1. 樂(lè)于分享，與同學(xué)相處很好。 2. 各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異，……(舉一例) 3. 積極組織并參加各類(lèi)活動(dòng)，……(舉一例)
Your expectations	……（兩點(diǎn)）

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80－100詞左右
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名或校名。
3. 文章必須包含所提供的要點(diǎn)。
Wang Lin is a ninth grade student. He’ll graduate this summer. He’s changed a lot during the last three years.
In the past, ___________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Wang Lin is a ninth grade student. He’ll graduate this summer. He’s changed a lot during the last three years.
In the past, he is shy, and he was afraid to speak in public. He was not good at history. He didn’t like sport. He also lost himself in surfing the Internet.
Now he likes sharing everything with his friends and he gets on well with his friends. He is good at all the subjects, especially in English. He is always first in our class. He takes active part in all kinds of action. Such as last month he won the champion in the 100-meter race.
I hope he will make great progress in math and he’ll be healthier in the future .

試題分析：本文應(yīng)以第三人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)。分三部分：第一部分寫(xiě)王林的過(guò)去，主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)；第二部分寫(xiě)王林的現(xiàn)在，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；第三部分寫(xiě)對(duì)王林的期望，主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文段落分明，語(yǔ)句通順。在寫(xiě)作中使用了不少短語(yǔ)和句型，為文章增色不少，如：be afraid to do sth害怕做某事，lost oneself in surfing the Internet.沉溺于上網(wǎng)，get on well with sb與某人相處融洽，takes active part in積極參加，I hope he will make great progress in math and he’ll be healthier in the future我希望他會(huì)在數(shù)學(xué)方面長(zhǎng)足進(jìn)步，將來(lái)他會(huì)更健康。