Question

反思可以使每個人成長進步，為未來做好計劃可以鑄就成功。初中的生活即將結束，新的高中學習將要到來。請你用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動或遺憾的事，同時為你將來的生活做一點設計，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文。One…thing in my mind is…..,I am happy that……,It is a pity that I didn’t ……,I will……
要求：內容真實，要點齊全，行文連貫，字數80左右,作文的開頭已給出。
My life in Junior school will come to an end soon.                        
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     

Answer 1

My life in Junior school will come to an end soon. I experienced so much. But there is one regretful thing in my mind. It makes me feel sorry forever.
On the first year of my Junior school, my English was good, because I liked my English teacher and her class was lively. But later, my English teacher left us because of her job. Another English teacher came to teach us. His class was unenjoyable and I did not like him. So from then on, I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons. Sometimes I listened to MP3 in class. You can imagine how my English was then.
From the thing, I recognized: Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable. If you do not work hard today, you will fail tomorrow.
I will learn to suit others.

解析這篇作文主要是回顧初中的生活，用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動或遺憾的事，同時為你將來的生活做一點設計，所以文章應該分成兩段，第一段是回顧，第二段是展望。第一段是過去時，第二段是一般將來時。題目給了幾個句型，寫作文時應該盡量用上。象范文里的：But there is one regretful thing in my mind. I will learn to suit others.另外范文里還有的句子很精彩，如：I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons.“我開始做和課堂無關的事”。Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable.“不是每個老師的課堂都讓人快樂的”。